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GOLD Of HER LIFE (1 reply)

Arina Asgar
3 years ago
Arina Asgar 3 years ago

An unadorned gal having no daydream of own,
Family said sound of this or that vocation;
To them never she said no;
And to their bidding give a nod.

She relishes the versatility in her pen;
But there's no rose without a thorn.
The world is green with envy to her fate;
To which her kindness is the bold riposte.

She nabs the masses owning hate;
Then inaugurate the hidden snakes.
While quashing stones on the struggle bus;
Gold of her life hugged the Gal.

                        by Arina Asgar

 

         

 

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

Thank you for sharing your poem with me.  I very much like "there's no rose without a thorn" - it gives us something meaningful in the way of an image that we can relate to.  There are a number of grammatical missteps but, a bit of editing could correct that.  I will admit there are some lines I simply don't understand and that may simply be a translation issue.  In any event, you have definitely captured a mood in your poem and that's a big part of what poetry is all about.  - Susan

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