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Harshika Arora (1 reply)

Harshika Arora
3 years ago
Harshika Arora 3 years ago

The poetry depicts  different shades of human beings like chocolate. The original state or the bitter one of bonbons is the way we mortals are in true sense and the other which is the sweet one or with sugercoatings is the way we people  always tend to be Defying the cosmos.

Chocolate 

Bittersweet is its cat bird attraction,

Like folks are maniacs for fascination,

Goeey , spice and hot is its eminence,

Like the mob bounded to affection.

 

 

Truth is embittered so are the bonbons,

Mellowness of their's can take to Abaddon,

Cacao is a true - blue in its dark and bitter bombshell,

Like mortals with so sugercoatings defying the cosmos.

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

What a very interesting comparison you chose as the premise for your tight and well written poem.  Thank you for submitting it for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  - Susan

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