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I Drowned in her magical love (1 reply)

Navya karey
3 years ago
Navya karey 3 years ago

When love reaches thy heart,
spring arrives with the fragrances of love;
the hymns of love from nightingales,
and the melodies of water with her beloved;
Fills the world of thee with giggles.

These wounds on your heart will heal,
your scars will vanish with this love;
The joyful smiles bloom;
The freshness of spring bows.

When my Nuthatch eyes reached me,
my eyes can't see the beauty of flowing water,
my ears deafen to hear the nightingale,
the falling world of mine falls;
But, the love of Nuthatch held me.

Her love healed my wounds,
vanished my scars,
The giggles of joy bloomed;
'Tis freshness of spring bowed in front of her smiles.

The wings of love reached my soul,
to wander around her kingdom,
to dive into her love,
and I drowned in her magical soul

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

I very much enjoyed reading your very "love-filled" poem.  Some of your lines give us a lovely vision of the world you are presenting to us - a world where love thrives and revives the soul.  I particularly liked "the freshness of spring bowed in front of her smiles" and "the wings of love reached my soul."  Thank you so much for sharing your poem with me, Susan

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