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I WOULD HAVE LOVED THEE MORE (1 reply)

@srijitrahaofficial
3 years ago

 

I would have loved thee more

--- Srijit Raha

I would have loved thee more
I wished thee stay for aye
Gripping my arms in breast of yours
So dimmed my wits that believed this life
But failed to notice its shadow.
Now I score thy grave to see thee more
And sleep with thee in this dark meadow.
My prose for thee have grown into weeds
So stiff, so pale...
With lifeless views.
My blood had shrank in inks of nibs
That sketches the ribs of yours.
I smell thy hairs
I smell thy torcs
And kiss it over and over
To cry in thee,
To be in thee,
To fade in thee forever.

 

 

Srijit Raha

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

Your poem has a very classical feel to it.  I can feel the emotion and the pain.  I'm sorry to say it is a bit long for the current request for two to four line poems.  I am always happy to read work submitted and thank you so much for your interest in poeteladykatz and for sharing your work with me, Susan

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