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Inspiration you call it !!! (1 reply)

therelatingfeel
2 years ago
therelatingfeel 2 years ago

DO YOU REMEMBER THE OLD YOU 

WHEN YOUR PARENTS WOULD COMPARE YOU

 

WITH FRIENDS AROUND OR NEIGHBOURS NEAR BY 

AND MOST OFTEN TO THE RELATIVES FAR OFF 

 

WHAT YOU USED TO FEEL AT THAT TIME 

DOES THAT NEVER MADE YOU UPSET

 

 MANY TIMES IT DID MADE YOU SAD AND YOU GOT ANGRY TOO

OFTEN GOT FRUSTRATED AND FELT WHY ARE YOU NOT UPTO THE MARK TOO

 

THE RESULTS MADE ME FEEL LITTLE DAZZLE

BUT LET ME TELL YOU THE REAL HUSTLE

COMPARING YOURSELF WITH THE GOOD YOU 

TO THE TODAY BETTER YOU

IS WHAT ALL YOU NEED ENOUGH FOCUS

 

TAKING INSPIRATION FROM THE OTHERS WORK IS OKAY

USING IT AS A MOTIVATION IS FINE 

BUT COMPARING YOUR WORK AND ART AND FEELING BAD THAy ARE BETTER 

AND DEGRADING YOUR HARDWORK IS NOT A JOKE 

EVERY ONE IS A STRUGGLER AND NO ONE IS PERFECT!!

therelatingfeel

Susan Katz
2 years ago
Susan Katz 2 years ago

Thank you for sharing this poem with such a fine message of achieving a sense of self worth and self esteem.  You message is right on, however, I think you need to spend some time working on your lines and trying to craft them into lines of poetry rather than lines that offer a very important message.  Poetry is all about imagery and emotion.  Imagery should spark the emotion.  What is an image for the "good you" for a "struggler" for "inspiration from other's work?"  Perhaps it would be helpful to read some English poets and see how they offer their messages through poetry.  I do believe the emotion and the honesty that is reflected in your poem.

I will be considering your poem for Featured Poem of the Month for December and, thank you for your interest in https://www.poetladykatz.com  Your friend in poetry, Susan

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