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Journey of Love by Bella (2 replies)

Bella
4 years ago
Bella 4 years ago

It’s hard, so hard to show my weakness. My heart cripples when I think of someone reading it.

 

Let your heart beat and your hope breed,

A fire in the rain lights itself to be

the light in the bottomless wreck,

the tender warmth in the unknown sea.

 

 

A guiltless venture, a flourishing seed,

Through the holes in the glass you see

a time beyond the fate concealed,

a string tied to the Garden of Dreams.

 

Happiness noticed in rare eyes, gleams 

like the sun that casts a shadow upon all evil,

like a child that begs to be noticed, so unlike

greed that shoulders a heavy burden.

 

A story told, a burden removed,

Tick-tock, your heart weighs upon

the smile so predictable, the step forward,

But if it all goes wrong, then boom

 

your hearts breaks into tiny pieces of glass.

Susan Katz
4 years ago
Susan Katz 4 years ago

Thank you, Bella, for sharing this beautiful poem.  And it is, a beautiful poem - filled with imagery, internal rhyme, intensity, emotional investment, and a message that touches one deeply.  I know the reluctance to share your heart with others, but it just may touch them in a way that connects them and makes them stronger.  Great job.  Great poem.  I am so glad you chose to share it with me, Susan

Bella
4 years ago
Bella 4 years ago

I had always wanted to pour my heart out, but there was no one to tell. Thank you for this opportunity.

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