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Just Come To My Grave (1 reply)

palakjatwani
3 years ago
palakjatwani 3 years ago

*Just come to my grave*:

I know sometimes I get mad,
I know it is called as a daydream.
I know you are not listening to me,
No matter how loudly I scream.

My heart is not ready to accept,
Your memories are haunting my soul.
To keep you alive in my every part,
I killed myself as a whole.

I never asked too much,
Just craved for your presence.
So many people around,
Yet I just focus on your absence.

I know we are not meant to be together,
But I still miss you everyday.
Leaving was never allowed you said,
But unexpectedly you didn't stay.

I thought I'll be okay someday,
I forgot that a part in me died.
I did every possible thing to not think of you,
Till the end I tried,till the end I cried.

You made me a writer,you made me a reader,
You made me happy,you made me sad.
Now I am all alone on this way of darkness,
You were all I had.

The day I leave forever,
I know for you things will be the same.
Just come to my grave and write your initials,
So what if I can not live with you here,atleast I can die hugging your name.

PALAK JATWANI

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Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

Thank you so much for sharing this intense, soulful, directly from the heart poem with me.  You have certainly poured your soul into the poem, and that's exactly what poets do.  I am happy to add it to the overflow of poems I've received for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for June.  I wish you many more creative moments and thank you again for sharing this very emotional poem with me, Susan

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