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Longing revelation (1 reply and 1 comment)

Fahad Khalique
1 year ago
Fahad Khalique 1 year ago

I don't know about others, but 

As anything puts all efforts

To come into existence; like 

A tiny seed tears apart 

The hard soil before growing

Same way; like 

A mother experiences latitude

Before bearing a child

And the gestural condition of 

A Prophet before devine revelation

Like; a volcano turns red, ferocious

And fierce before eruption

As the sea bashes it's head 

Against the shore before a hurricane

The contingency of independence

That creates turmoil and resistance

Before holding it's final status

The same way I feel 

Untill and unless,

I indite my mental milieu

On the paper; which turns 

Into a poetry. 

Susan Katz
1 year ago
Susan Katz 1 year ago

Thank you so very much for sharing your poetry with me.  Your poem has a strong presence and some powerful lines (

As the sea bashes it's head

Against the shore before a hurricane

There is strong imagery here and in some of your other lines as well.  If I were to offer an editing suggestion, it would be to go back through the poem, removing all words that are not necessary to the power, purpose, and flow of the poem.

Your friend in poetry, Susan

Fahad Khalique
1 year ago

Gratitude Galore.
What if I exclude the line from (The Contingency.....final status)?

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