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k79aushik
3 years ago
k79aushik 3 years ago

An old leaf parting off -
I can hear the sound as it detached.
Or was it the sound of a new one generating through my skin, with which I'm still attached?

A part of my bark that I shed,
Reveals the fresh juicy thing.
So I'm at loss -
Am I getting old or
Evolving to a new being?

Deeper my root runs
Through the stony ground,
More wanderers I can see around
Resting under my shade.
I don't mourn the parts I shed.

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for December.  I love the perspective in this poem - the tree wondering about itself - losing its leaves - generating new ones - perhaps flowering - producing fruit - lovely way of presenting the feelings and experiences of trees.  If I were to make a suggestion, it would be to incorporate more imagery in your poem so that we could experience what you feel - what the tree feels - on a sensory level.  Example:  "Deeper my roots run/like fingers reaching down/searching through the stony ground."  Very well done and I thank you for your interest in https://www.poetladykatz.com  Your friend in poetry, Susan

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