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Secret (1 reply)

Akshay
4 years ago
Akshay 4 years ago

Life, what is life?

I don't think I deserve but 

now I'm just preserved in pain.

Mine, who is mine?

I had only few but now they all flew away

 

I wish I could tell someone,

that you are the only one,

I want to be with you always together.

Disclosing my lonely side.

Cause I am the only child.

I wish you could hold me now and forever.

 

These are few ashes of my life.

I still try to hide like I always cry alone.

These are few ashes of my life.

I want to heal but I just don't feel like home.

 

But sometimes I think 

there's someone far away.

Hearing my voice and 

telling that he's on his way.

You're my last hope and I'm

waiting for you all day.

Please don't stay, just take me away.

 

I know you'll not be perfect

Just be my secret.

 

Go, where should I go?

I can't find a place that I 

can still face anymore.

Me, You still judge me.

This is who I am and I 

know that I can't afford.

 

I wish I could be happy

Like everyone when I see.

I don't know but it feels like hell.

Now I don't even feel the breeze.

I'm alone but there's no peace.

Nobody likes me for being myself

 

These are few ashes of my life.

I still try to hide like I always cry alone.

These are few ashes of my life.

I want to heal but I just don't feel like home.

 

But sometimes I think 

there's someone far away.

Hearing my voice and 

telling that he's on his way.

You're my last hope and I'm

waiting for you all day.

Please don't stay, just take me away.

 

I know you'll not be perfect

Just be my secret.

Susan Katz
4 years ago
Susan Katz 4 years ago

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I like the idea of this "dream" being just your secret.  It adds drama and a sense of self to the poem.  - Susan

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