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The New World - Karan Singh sengar (1 reply and 1 comment)

Karansengar
4 years ago
Karansengar 4 years ago

What has happened to this wonderful world?

where Everything has come to a standstill.

Are we responsible for this nature?

or we are just another face of disappointing beings

 

Is this what we honestly deserve?

No, I guess, we do not

But we are truly responsible for this tragedy

Another unwanted gift to wipe our fates entirely

 

We had taken the world for granted

By grabbing all the things it had to offer

And now we suffer unwanted times

Which we never thought to experience in our lives

 

The world outside is a marvelous place

Restored with many blessings in every way

It's a place to live, listen and breathe

To run our imaginations wild and free

 

And now I know, a day will come

The day when we might see another sun

When we will make the world stop

And there will be nothing left to fight for

 

We will make a new world that day.

With the chirping of birds and reduced traffic in the way.

When animals wouldn't fight for survival

And humans become the new world peace revivals.

 

Can there be anything more lovely,

We will be able to see the beauty of a growing old tree.

They will keep their existence without being cut down

And we will lie beneath them thanking the ground.

©karansengar9404

 

 

Susan Katz
4 years ago
Susan Katz 4 years ago

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  What a lovely ending!  "And we will lie beneath them thanking the ground."  "Thanking the ground," I think, is a particularly lovely image.  Thank you for sharing your work with me, Susan

Karansengar
4 years ago

Wow, it's wonderful. Thank u for the opportunity.

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