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Till the last stop of life (1 reply and 2 comments)

sumanshubhanshi
3 years ago
sumanshubhanshi 3 years ago

On a moving train,
That carries us,
In varied compartments.
I wish, I meet you more than once.
The past which it leaves behind.
The future which is predictably visible.
I wish, we step together on the nearest station.
We may have different directions.
Though, I wish, we decorate our home in the end.
You might like Italian,
And I would love Indian,
Though, I wish, we cook together in our little kitchen.
You might sleep late at night,
And I would be an early riser.
Though, I wish, we sit together admiring the beautiful night sky.
Joy and laughter would shape our bond.
Love and smiles must nourish life.
And the train of life must go on,
Till I lie on my death bed,
And you sit nearest to me,
Hoping to spend a few more seconds of eternal love.

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

What a "passionate" and loving poem.  I like the image that you carry throughout the poem, of "life as a train ride" inevitably reaching its destination.  "Love and smiles must nourish life." is a very nice line.  I congratulate you on your effort and thank you so much for sharing your poem with me.  At the moment, I am only featuring 2 to 4 line poems on my Instagram page, but do know I was very pleased to read your work.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

sumanshubhanshi
3 years ago

Thank You Susan! Means a lot to me

sumanshubhanshi
3 years ago

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