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WILTING LEAVES OF SUMMER (1 reply)

Nandini Jha
3 years ago
Nandini Jha 3 years ago

Life a four letter word with 

 

Hidden four billion years of meaning 

 

Starts being dependent 

 

And ends being trying to be independent 

 

It's about trying to meet your needs 

 

And ending up being unsatisfied with the penny for your deeds 

 

 

 

Its about finding triumphs in your defeat 

 

Knowing if there is sunset then other day would start with a sunrise 

 

Knowing if leaves can wilt in summer then they can rejuvenate on watering 

 

If its about death then its inevitable 

 

Its more about finding meaning of your existence 

 

 

 

Life is a game that never ends with triumph or defeat 

 

Its about the lessons you've learned from your mistakes 

 

Its about finding happiness in those moments of sadness 

 

It never ends in grave and starts when you're born 

 

It ends when you stop living and starts when you realise your inner potential 

 

 

 

Summer tries to devitalise and you try to bounce back with greater energy 

 

Why do we need to stop trying ? 

 

Life never asks for subjugation 

 

In the end its all about living it fully 

 

Despite destruction we opt to dream 

 

Dreaming that never ends with night passed 

 

 

 

Earth asking you to be creative 

 

Is the most pleasing gift 

 

A teacher that teaches without speaking a word 

 

Is the finest creation of time 

 

Life gives you a chance 

 

Take it , live it , but never give up 

 

We have a lot more potential then they tell us 

 

A brighter future then we dream 

 

Just we need is a try that never ends with failure gets even stronger with a failure

 

 

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

Thank you so much for sharing "Wilting Leaves of Summer" with me.  You have some very fine lines in this very interesting, very intensely felt poem.  I was particularly taken by the line "a teacher that teaches without speaking a word" - what an interesting concept and how very provocative.  - Susan

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