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Write About You (1 reply)

Moumita Sinha
3 years ago
Moumita Sinha 3 years ago

If I could write about you,
With the same force that drives my thoughts,
Ruthlessly, relentlessly
Devouring my existence in the blink of an eye,
I'd stay up all those nights I wasted dreaming of you
And torture myself into agony
Till you're begging to be released from the prison of my mind
Out in the form of beautiful words.
I'd learn your movements, and the thunder of your footfall
Your heavy breathing at my shoulder, urging me on and on
I'd write till my wits collapse
I'll write till I'm chock-full of sea water and cigarette smoke in my lungs.

Susan Katz
3 years ago
Susan Katz 3 years ago

There are some very strong images in your poem.  I particularly liked "Till your begging to be released from the prison of my mind/out in the form of beautiful words."  I also very much like "the thunder of your footfall."  I'm a little less sure of "chock-full" as it somehow seems out of place.  Well conceived, well written, emotionally charged poem!  Thank you so much for sharing with me.  I will definitely consider your poem to be featured in a future poetladykatz Instagram post.  Your friend in poetry, Susan

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