New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you for submitting your very insightful poem. I think your poem might benefit from some research into English grammar, though I will say, I think you did a powerful job of getting your message across. I like where you intend your poem to end, but think you need to reword that last line so that it says what you want it to. Both are seldom – (plural since there are two) found (in?) bliss (in the form of?) bliss (as) bliss. As written, it is a bit confusing. I am very grateful for your interest in poetladykatz and thank you again, for sharing your work with me. – Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/contemplate
Original Post by abhishobi
Contemplate
<p>When people talk about beauty,<br />Seldom it's about the inner one.<br />It's always about eyes, nose, skin tone, height and weight,<br />Why not about other personality traits?<br />Things which mirror dosen't reflect.<br />If one is beautiful out and ugly within,<br />Is that beauty or the other way around,<br />Ofcourse, both is seldom found bliss.</p>