New reply from Susan Katz
<p>I am very taken with your concept that nature does not live for itself – and neither do you. I believe you need to work on your translation into English as there are some moments that simply do not work. For example: the line "Am I worth for living with nature" should probably read – "Am I worthy of living with nature?" I do love your ending! "Because living for each other/is a rule of nature." Is it A rule or THE rule? In any event, thank you so much for sharing. I think your poem is filled with emotion and truth and a message that is important and meaningful. Thank you so much for sharing with me. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/nature-and-me
Original Post by Bayjool
Nature and me..
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Thinking<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>that nature </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Is so different</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">so am i?</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">I feel same at times </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">We both are not living for itself </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">nature… nor i.</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Nothing in nature lives for itself </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">River’s don’t drink its own water</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Trees don’t eat its own fruit</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">The sun Doesn’t shine for itself</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">A flowers fragrance is not for itself</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">I too lived for others </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Serving with love</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Memory i gave them</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">How they took it</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Thats the way i will get it</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">My karma played a role</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">And my survival was in mode</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">My affection was always loud</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Like i am always there Anytime </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">I didnt expect too much</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">But little would be loved by me </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">I never asked for anything </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Gratitude is what comes first</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">As every second I breathe </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">But forgiveness was eligible for me</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Am i worth for living with nature </span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Because Living for eachother</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">is a rule of nature.</span></p>
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">— bayjool</span></p>