New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Nice! One suggestion – might it be more to the point to say "massacred (by) unrighteousness?" The line seems just a little off by the use of the word "in." I do, however, very much like your poem – the tight fist of it and the potent message, and the lovely rhythm. I will definitely be considering your poem to be featured on my poetladykatz Instagram page in the next week or two. Thank you for sharing. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/unrhymed-submission
Original Post by La belle dam sans merci
Unrhymed Submission
<p> Incognito </p>
<p>My life is like a cocktail party, </p>
<p>Massacred in unrighteousness,</p>
<p>Neither bliss, nor splendour </p>
<p>Rather an absolute unidentified archipelago </p>