New comment from Susan Katz
Not this week – but the following week. Sorry to have mislead you about the timing.
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/pitstop
Original Post by Anar
Pitstop
<p>We were a pitstop, the break in the woods, with a picnic basket spread over the grass, with the breeze running tangles in our hair under the hazy sun. </p>
<p style="text-align: center;">But in my deluded expectations and efforts for us to become the destination, I forgot to realise that we were just meant to be another milestone, nameless and scattered along the way.</p>
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<p>Thank you so much for sharing your poem with me. I very much like the images and the way you maintain the vision of a "pitstop" throughout the poem. It works! I will be featuring you poem one day this week on my Instagram post – so, stay tuned. Your friend in poetry, Susa</p>