Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Limitless

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you for sharing your poem with me.  It is light and lovely and I would only ask that you reconsider your first rhyme – "dream and cream."  It seems a bit contrived and, I think, takes away from the bright and uplifting image you are trying to create.  Not every line has to rhyme and often, poetry works best when not rhyming.  Just a thought for you to consider.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by Candice


<p style="text-align: center;"><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong><em>#imagery</em></strong></span></p>
<p style="text-align: center;">The secret to a happy life is always one's dream,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Not everyone is destined to be the cream.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Limitless are my horizons, but down-to-earth am I,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Aiming to be a star, still left to explore the sky !</p>