New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you for sharing your poem with me. It is light and lovely and I would only ask that you reconsider your first rhyme – "dream and cream." It seems a bit contrived and, I think, takes away from the bright and uplifting image you are trying to create. Not every line has to rhyme and often, poetry works best when not rhyming. Just a thought for you to consider. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/limitless
Original Post by Candice
Limitless
<p style="text-align: center;"><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><strong><em>#imagery</em></strong></span></p>
<p style="text-align: center;">The secret to a happy life is always one's dream,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Not everyone is destined to be the cream.</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Limitless are my horizons, but down-to-earth am I,</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Aiming to be a star, still left to explore the sky !</p>