Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to A Haze of Stardust

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you for sharing this very intimate and loving poem with me.  It is a bit longer than what I am able to feature on my Instagram page, for this submission request period.  Also, I would like to suggest that perhaps, trying so hard to rhyme may detract from the real emotion you are trying to express.  Poetry does not always need to rhyme but it does always, need to make us feel!  Find a way to express what you are feeling through the magic and power of imagery (metaphor and simile.)  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by N.Singh

A Haze of Stardust

<p>Glaring at your profound eyes </p>
<p>Unbolts the Paradise of imagination </p>
<p>Your welcoming touch </p>
<p>Creates an indescribable sensation</p>
<p> </p>
<p>Your oceanic self </p>
<p>Bathed with a lovely aura </p>
<p>Under the shining stardust </p>
<p>You're besieged with a beauteous persona </p>
<p> </p>
<p>Under the melancholic welkin </p>
<p>Your twinkling hands caressing my tiny fingers </p>
<p>While I gaze at the sky </p>
<p>As the adrenaline rush lingers </p>
<p> </p>
<p>Staring at those eyes </p>
<p>Makes me go in anticipation </p>
<p>Your soft glow </p>
<p>Throws me into a beautiful dimension</p>