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Beautifully Penned poem


Original Post by Anousha Mishra

Serenading the moon

<p>And in the darkness of the night sky,</p>
<p>I can see your softness glow .</p>
<p>The contrast you set is a beautiful lie </p>
<p>For the distance hurts sometimes, you know.</p>
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<p>And each night I love to see </p>
<p>Parts of you becoming a whole ,</p>
<p>And then this mysterious thought strikes me</p>
<p>If I'll ever be able to catch a glimpse of your soul.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>O you! That shines when everything around tries to dim your light,</p>
<p>O you! Who stays to give my lonely self some company.</p>
<p>But Love, can you come a little closer and save me from this plight,</p>
<p>I do feel your cold hands but soon you'll be gone and once again it'll be sunny.</p>

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<p>Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  There is certainly a great deal of "self" in your poem, making it a personal experience for the reader.  I very much like the concept of trying to "catch a glimpse of your soul."  It gives the reader something meaningful to think about.  – Susan</p>