Poet Lady Katz (new forum post): I’d like some feedback on my work! Excited to have stumbled on your site! I really have no idea what I’m doing. I’m not sure what people like to read or how you even define poetry?

Poetry Talk

New post from georgia_pearl

I’d like some feedback on my work! Excited to have stumbled on your site! I really have no idea what I’m doing. I’m not sure what people like to read or how you even define poetry?

  1. You’re a Beach 

  2. You rise with the tide

    You’re a gentle and smooth ride 

    You’ve so much deep and unexplored 

    You take me to a sparkling shore 

    The water’s blue like your eyes 

    Your hair’s an ocean wave’s glide 

    Your skin is like the sea swept sand 

    The sun is the warm touch of your hand

https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/id-like-some-feedback-on-my-work-excited-to-ha