Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to bee poem

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>It's delightful.  Poetry should leave us feeling something and, your short but "sweet" poem, leaves us feeling uplifted, happy, imagining spreading our own "bee wings" and flying.  Thank you so very much for sharing.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by princessjelsa

bee poem

<p>just wanted to share a short sweet poem i wrote when i was buying my home and moving out of my moms house : )</p>
<p><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><span class="s1"> bee poem</span></span></p>
<p><span class="s2">look up, look down</span></p>
<p><span class="s2">scent of honey in the air</span></p>
<p><span class="s2">spread my bee wings- and fly,</span></p>
<p><span class="s2">it’s my turn to leave the hive.</span></p>
<p><span class="s2">i’m my own queen now.</span></p>
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<p>thats all just simple and amateur. hope anyone reading has a great day!</p>