Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Blessing of rejoice..

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>This is really a very lovely poem.  Your imagery is intriguing and invites the reader in to the poem in a meaningful way.  There are a few places where the grammar needs to be addressed – for example: the tense should be "confined" not "confines" – "enclosed in (an) envelope of trust…" – "Amidst (take out "of") the caravan of time…"  Really a very lovely, very well written poem – you should be very proud of it.  Thank you so much for sharing it with me.  I hope, at some future date, to be able to feature it on one of my Instagram posts.  Your friend in poetry,  Susan</p>


Original Post by AYESHA SHAHID

Blessing of rejoice..

<p>I write you in my verse </p>
<p>With ink of impalpable words, </p>
<p>Shuffled with scarlet memories</p>
<p>Enclosed in envelope of trust… </p>
<p> </p>
<p>My soul yearns for your amber eyes</p>
<p>Confines in ageless sunrise, </p>
<p>Expressing my pristine feeling through fragrance ethereal</p>
<p>You are my phenomenal blessing of rejoice. </p>
<p> </p>
<p>Admist of the caravan of time</p>
<p>I wait for you day and night, </p>
<p>Surpassing million of miles</p>
<p>Hoping to meet you in brisk moonlight..</p>
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