Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Dream World by sarangi_Chaaru

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you so much for submitting your lovely, lyrical poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  You have some very charming lines in your poem.  I particularly liked  "In a land where / Butterflies with wings of kindness are seen …' "Where the soil is tranquil and love drizzles upon them' – Well done!  I am grateful you shared your poem with me, Susan </p>
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Original Post by sarangi_chaaru

Dream World by sarangi_Chaaru

<p><strong>And then I closed my eyes </strong></p>
<p><strong>Walked slowly, enjoying every single step</strong></p>
<p><strong>Trying to feel every single moment</strong></p>
<p>I am a refugee , in search of safe heaven</p>
<p>Hoping to find ​home , a small home </p>
<p>With a tiny Garden Would be more than enough </p>
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<p>In a land where ,</p>
<p>Butterflies with wings of kindness are seen …</p>
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<p>Where witches covering herb Gardens are seen ….</p>
<p>Where kids posting letters to the fairy godmothers are seen …</p>
<p>Where the soil is tranquil and love drizzles upon them <br />Giving life to Everything ….</p>
<p>Where I live peacefully</p>
<p>Knitting my hopes into reality <br />Sitting near my orieal Window , waiting patiently <br />For my origami cranes to Finally fly</p>
<p>Wanting to see them flying away <br />To the horizons I never got a chance to explore <br />And</p>
<p>When the dusk Finally engulf the day <br />With all the mesmerising Memories of the day</p>
<p>I will go to sleep placidly <br />To unending time ….</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;"><br />                                 sarangi_chaaru<br /><br />​</p>
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