New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Well done – very interesting – very much liking "float a desperate hand trying to hold onto vapor…" and, do also like, your ending. I will definitely be considering your work to be featured on my poetladykatz Instagram page, in the next week or two. I am delighted that you chose to share, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/letting-go-of-older-versions
Original Post by SpritzedPoetry
Letting go of older versions
<p> She could only see herself blurring out of sight with every hitched breath. <br />All she did was float a desperate hand trying to hold onto vapour of that self which vanished, or perhaps, SHED.</p>