Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Sorrow

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Very dark and emotional – and I do like the image of the well.  However, I'm wondering about the "well" consuming all of your from within."  A well might drown you or prevent you from escaping but, consuming you from within seems a stretch.  I wonder if you might rethink how your image works – and perhaps come up with something more in keeping with the theme of "well."  In any event, your piece is well written and I would love to see it again, if you decide to rework it.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by Amrutha


<p>Sorrow is a dark well, out of which you can't seem to escape,</p>
<p>a well that envelopes and consumes all of you from within.</p>