Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Your eyes

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you for submitting your poem.  I like the tone of your poem and the suggestiveness of it.  Grammatically, I believe, in the last line "is" would work better than "has."  You have a good sense of the rhythm of poetry and the need for emotional commitment to your words and thoughts.  I would be happy to consider your poem, after editing, to be featured on my Instagram page.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by AYESHA SHAHID

Your eyes

<p>What is in your eyes.. </p>
<p>I really can't understand what keeps me enticed. </p>
<p style="text-align: center;">But it has something that pierced my heart and soul… </p>