New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you for submitting your poem. I like the tone of your poem and the suggestiveness of it. Grammatically, I believe, in the last line "is" would work better than "has." You have a good sense of the rhythm of poetry and the need for emotional commitment to your words and thoughts. I would be happy to consider your poem, after editing, to be featured on my Instagram page. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/your-eyes
Original Post by AYESHA SHAHID
Your eyes
<p>What is in your eyes.. </p>
<p>I really can't understand what keeps me enticed. </p>
<p style="text-align: center;">But it has something that pierced my heart and soul… </p>