New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you for submitting your poem. May I suggest a grammatical correction or two – "You are the reason FOR my smile – "when my beloved is miles away." Just a thought that might help the emotions of your poem translate better for those reading it in English. I appreciate your interest in poetladykatz and look forward to seeing more of your work, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/happiness-lies-in-you
Original Post by Together we rhyme
Happiness lies in you
<div class="wps_wp_editor_quote">You are the reason of my smile, when beloved are far away miles.</div>