Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Happiness lies in you

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you for submitting your poem.  May I suggest a grammatical correction or two – "You are the reason FOR my smile – "when my beloved is miles away."  Just a thought that might help the emotions of your poem translate better for those reading it in English.  I appreciate your interest in poetladykatz and look forward to seeing more of your work, Susan</p>


Original Post by Together we rhyme

Happiness lies in you

<div class="wps_wp_editor_quote">You are the reason of my smile, when beloved are far away miles.</div>