New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem with me. There is so much love and joy in your poem and you have some very beautiful images as well. I would like to suggest that you don't work so hard on rhyming, your poetry would stand out even more if you concentrated on your beautiful and meaningful images. I am happy to consider your poem for Featured Poem of the Month for June. Keep writing – you have talent, Susan</p>
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Original Post by Martand
Martand
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<p>She’s a mermaid of an ocean, eyes mirroring pearls<br />She’s the Aphrodite ohh god, as she smiles magic swirls<br />She’s a band of gleaming stars, sweeping all the gloom,<br />She’s a rose ousting beauty, I watch her as she blooms.</p>
<p>She’s a breeze of monsoon night, whispering in my ears<br />She’s a river of elixir, douses thirst with her tears.<br />She’s a never ending joy, I adore her as we meet,<br />She’s a wine of utmost richness, I enjoy her as a treat.</p>
<p>She’s a belle of the sky, giving complex to the moon<br />She’s a nightingale of a shore, I dance as she tunes.<br />She’s a blend of sparkling eyes, with long silky hair,<br />She’s an art of the God, to be handled with some care.</p>
<p>She’s a realm of spirituality, a glorious blue-eyed saint<br />She’s a sweet melodious song, as I listen, I get faint.<br />She’s an eternal beauty, as she smiles she kills many,<br />She’s a voice of my soul, a tranquilizing epiphany.</p>
<p>She’s like the autumn, as she sheds maple leaves.<br />She’s the Cinderella, whose shoe I wish to keep.<br />She’s the most divine, an elegant celestial queen <br />She’s the one who has, made me cheerful and serene.</p>
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