Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Simple, I write

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you for sharing your poem with me.  There are some very good moments in your poem and you have managed to convey the strong feelings you have.  There is, for me, a bit of confusion with the language at times.</p>
<p><em>They stick a firm reason for the nip to go beyond a rampage</em></p>
<p><em>And catch and catch </em></p>
<p>I am a bit confused by these lines and wonder if it might be a translation issue.  In any event, your poem is filled with passion and purpose and that, is the heart of poetry.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by __.ultraviolet._

Simple, I write

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<p style="text-align: center;"><em>It's been an arithmetic cultivation though</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>For a renowned seedling</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>Similarity fades the moment, the tip flares</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>Was it a delicacy that my muscles prompted to etch? </em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>Every drop of nectar that is sweeter ever-more than I read</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>How toxic rather a palanquin deprives</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>Maa! You denied to query her baby , she's born</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>As maa, thou awakes all tiny heavy for her visit</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>Just pricked up the enlarged cell of poetry to master them</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>They stick a firm reason for the nip to go beyond a rampage</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>And catch and catch – a falcon to be inside you</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>Seems like evil owes to pay the way</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>If not being sure, else make it true</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>By making you the judge to the heart of judiciary</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"> </p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>I write, Yes not a good one instead a version of myself</em></p>
<p style="text-align: center;"><em>To salute every other authors trying to pedal and bloom!!!</em></p>