New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Very dark and emotional – and I do like the image of the well. However, I'm wondering about the "well" consuming all of your from within." A well might drown you or prevent you from escaping but, consuming you from within seems a stretch. I wonder if you might rethink how your image works – and perhaps come up with something more in keeping with the theme of "well." In any event, your piece is well written and I would love to see it again, if you decide to rework it. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/sorrow
Original Post by Amrutha
Sorrow
<p>Sorrow is a dark well, out of which you can't seem to escape,</p>
<p>a well that envelopes and consumes all of you from within.</p>