New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Love this! Concise and precise and says exactly what you want it to say and it does so, by creating two exciting images. Well done! If I were you and this were my poem, I would take out the commas and just let the poem flow – perhaps, leaving spaces ( 3 – 5) where you now have commas. The reason I suggest this is because the poem is so short – the images – one following the other – both powerful and I do feel the commas are like "stop signs" slowing us down from taking it all in a single, powerful "gulp." Either way – commas or no commas, I will be featuring your poem on a future Instagram page post. Thank you so very much for sharing, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/caveat
Original Post by beachessandseas
Caveat
<p>We could crash into the ocean, </p>
<p>and still, end up in flames.</p>