Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Urvashi @patteringlife

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>This is a very delightful little insight into the hazards of love.  Thank you so much for sharing.  May I suggest, "move" should be "moves" and "stems" might more accurately be "roots."  I wonder if you would be willing to do some editing and then resubmit.  I would very much like to see it again and perhaps, be able to consider it for featuring on my Instagram page.  Thank you again for sharing your work with me, Susan</p>


Original Post by Urvashi

Urvashi @patteringlife

<p>Love Bound</p>
<p>Love is a flower blooming inside the chest while its scent move through your head.<br />It's stems spread and don't rest untill they tie you from feet till head.</p>