New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Well done – and thank you for the work you put in to bring this short poem to a more impactful, meaningful, and poetic conclusion. I will definitely be considering your poem as one to be featured on a future (next two weeks) poetladykatz Instagram page post. Thank you for your efforts and for letting me be a part of the process of taking words and crafting them into poems. Nicely done! – Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/matters-ash-edited
Original Post by RelicDJames
Matters ~ Ash (Edited)
<p style="text-align: center;">A whisper I hear even when by myself</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Loud as the howling winds within the rocky caves</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">Mind unstill unclear as the murky seas</p>
<p style="text-align: center;">With true, false, and the rest.</p>