Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Melting moon in love

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>Thank you so much for sharing your "love-filled" poem with me.  I can feel the intensity and passion with which you embraced your subject.  I will consider your poem, along with the many, many others that have been submitted for consideration, for Featured Poem of the Month for July.  I will be announcing my decision, the last week of June. – Susan</p>


Original Post by Sushmita sharma

Melting moon in love

<p>Hy moon you are king and your love is queen,</p>
<p>You have given a huge palace to your queen;</p>
<p>Thy head is shining with star's crown,</p>
<p>You are truly crazy in love;you can rob the world,</p>
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<p>Your love that veils thy stain,</p>
<p>The watcher only sees the moonlight.</p>
<p>You steal the sun's light for the moonlight.</p>
<p>Both are incomplete without each other,</p>
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<p>You are a witness to love,</p>
<p>Everyone sees your love in your face.</p>
<p>How lucky and clever you are,</p>
<p>Enjoy the view that no one can see.</p>
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<p>Hide in the clouds and see Lovebirds,</p>
<p>And steals the drops of love and gives them to the moonlight,</p>
<p>You get so immersed in the love of moonlight;</p>
<p>Start melting and falling on the earth.</p>
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<p>I have seen millions of lover but never seen like you,</p>
<p>Teaches the world how to forget yourself in love,</p>
<p>Bathe the night with your love,</p>
<p>Your love touches horizon in night.</p>
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<p>- by Sushmita Sharma</p>
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