New reply from Susan Katz
<p>I am a little confused by the meaning of the poem. "Upto" is not a word in English – and grammatically, "it's paves a way with secret away…" has no meaning that I can grasp. "Pens on paper culminate (in) wizardry"is nice, and "nature's rhythm on my soul…" is nice, but I'm not sure how the word "shower" fits in. I think you have some good moments and a real feel for poetry. It may just be, a translation from one language into another, issue. I am very happy you chose to share your poem with me and hope my comments have been helpful. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/the-vintage-of-singing-words
Original Post by __.ultraviolet._
The vintage of singing words
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<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Upto day , it's paves a way with secret away </em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Pens on paper culminate wizardry, as cindrella had </em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Not a doubt, letters rejuvenate power </em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Nature's rhythm on my soul shower </em></p>
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