Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to The vintage of singing words

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>I am a little confused by the meaning of the poem.  "Upto" is not a word in English – and grammatically, "it's paves a way with secret away…" has no meaning that I can grasp.  "Pens on paper culminate (in) wizardry"is nice, and "nature's rhythm on my soul…" is nice, but I'm not sure how the word "shower" fits in.  I think you have some good moments and a real feel for poetry.  It may just be, a translation from one language into another, issue.  I am very happy you chose to share your poem with me and hope my comments have been helpful.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by __.ultraviolet._

The vintage of singing words

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<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Upto day , it's paves a way with secret away </em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Pens on paper culminate wizardry, as cindrella had </em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Not a doubt, letters rejuvenate power </em></p>
<p style="text-align: left;"><em>Nature's rhythm on my soul shower </em></p>
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