Poet Lady Katz: new forum reply to Till the last stop of life

New reply from Susan Katz

<p>What a "passionate" and loving poem.  I like the image that you carry throughout the poem, of "life as a train ride" inevitably reaching its destination.  "Love and smiles must nourish life." is a very nice line.  I congratulate you on your effort and thank you so much for sharing your poem with me.  At the moment, I am only featuring 2 to 4 line poems on my Instagram page, but do know I was very pleased to read your work.  Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>


Original Post by sumanshubhanshi

Till the last stop of life

<p>On a moving train,<br />That carries us,<br />In varied compartments.<br />I wish, I meet you more than once.<br />The past which it leaves behind.<br />The future which is predictably visible.<br />I wish, we step together on the nearest station.<br />We may have different directions.<br />Though, I wish, we decorate our home in the end.<br />You might like Italian,<br />And I would love Indian,<br />Though, I wish, we cook together in our little kitchen.<br />You might sleep late at night,<br />And I would be an early riser.<br />Though, I wish, we sit together admiring the beautiful night sky.<br />Joy and laughter would shape our bond.<br />Love and smiles must nourish life.<br />And the train of life must go on,<br />Till I lie on my death bed,<br />And you sit nearest to me, <br />Hoping to spend a few more seconds of eternal love.</p>