New reply from Susan Katz
<p>Interesting and intriguing little poem – thank you so much for sharing. While I have, on occasion, railed against rhyme – I think it works here. I might, if I were you, delete the punctuation and just let the words run together. I think it would work – kind of a "thought" that forms in the mind. We don't punctuate those. I will definitely be considering your poem as one of the ones I will be featuring in the next week or two, on my Instagram page. I invite you to think about the punctuation and let me know. Either way, I will consider it, as mentioned before. Your friend in poetry, Susan</p>
https://poetladykatz.com/poetry-talk/two-line-poem
Original Post by @geniuss
Two-line Poem
<p>No use of regret, when everything <span style="text-decoration: underline;">scatters;</span></p>
<p>Just remember one thing, your every move matters!!</p>