[Susan Katz]

Thank  you for submitting this very intense and well written poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month, for June.  I am so happy you decided to share your work with me, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for your good words and, your fine poem. You have a true sense of poetic flow, with some fine images and impressive line break. I will add it the poems I am considering for Featured Poem of the Month for June. I am happy we share a similar passion for poetry. – Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so very much for submitting your poem for consideration for Poem of the Month.  Your poem is powerful, filled with emotional integrity and the true sense of imagery and line break, that poetry requires.  Well done!  Once again, thank you for sharing this “heart driven” poem with me, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting this very passionate and persuasive poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I very much appreciate you sharing it with me, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I like the “conversational” tone of your poem and very much appreciate you sharing it with me, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I like the idea of this “dream” being just your secret.  It adds drama and a sense of self to the poem.  – Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for sharing this very upbeat and tender poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I appreciate you sharing it with me, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  There is an almost “painful – frantic” rhythm to the poem that adds to the message and the drama.  I very much appreciate you sharing your poem with me, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  You have a nice way with imagery and I very much was taken by your last line.  I appreciate you sharing your poem with me, Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting this very thoughtful and thought provoking poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I particularly liked the way your ending “faded” away like “withering flowers.”  – Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting your poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I particularly liked the twist at the end.  – Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for sharing your poem and submitting it for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  You have some deep thoughts and fine images in your poem.  – Susan

[Susan Katz]

Thank you for submitting your poem (and your very fine and articulate explanation) for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  I am aware of the devastating consequences of mental health issues amongst the young, having spent many years teaching poetry in schools.  It is real and urgent and must be addressed.  I very much appreciate your sharing your poem and your wisdom.  – Susan

[Susan Katz]

Please see my previous comment.

[Susan Katz]

Thank you so much for submitting this thoughtful, lovely poem for consideration for Featured Poem of the Month.  You have some very nice images in your poem that bring it to life for the reader.  Thank you very much for sharing, Susan

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